Sunday, March 25, 2007

PICTURE PERFECT

They smile, they laugh
They are happy and gay
They are rich, "they are good",
Or so the others say!

Their smiles may hide a thousand secrets
Their laughs may veil their sins
Yet, they live and be happy
Or, so the others say!

13 comments:

  1. Their smiles may hide a thousand secrets
    Their laughs may veil their sins

    Beautiful

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  2. What others say,
    What do I care?

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  3. Anonymous3:28 PM

    Everythings a show!

    Loved this poem :)!

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  4. @suchi
    "so the others say.."
    i used it in the sense- "people speak; and speak anything". they may be true, they may be false; yet, they ll continue to speak assuming virtues.

    it's poetry and not essay. i was not giving out suggessions to care about "what others say"..

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  5. @shammu

    thnk u so much!

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  6. Thanks for you work, very good, and have a good week.

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  7. Anonymous12:23 PM

    ur name sounds kinda familiar to me..have u ever written to youngtimes.... if not :D i hope u dont mind me asking :)!
    Cheers! TAkecare!

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  8. Anonymous5:32 PM

    u keep it nice and simple...i really like it!

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  9. @shammu

    nope.. :)..thts ok..

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  10. @santos and anisha

    thnk u!

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  11. Anonymous7:03 PM

    Im coming here after a long time...
    Great work!
    keep it coming...

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