Monday, September 27, 2010

SAILING NOWHERE


The sea was wide- so blue and cold

I needed to land before- I grew old

Not a pint of anything was still sold

Neither rocks so bright, nor the shining gold.


Birds filled the sky-and fishes, the sea

There was no land- to where I can flee

In the winking waters- I felt its glee

Show me a land where- I can be free


Such a weary travel- To where, I knew not

All was litter- What I'd now got

Oh! Please tell me sea! Is this what I sought?

Such a tiresome battle- But for what was it fought?


The sea was wide-so blue and cold

I needed to land before I grew old

I might never land, may never be bold,

It's now just a life here- With rocks and gold...

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:31 PM

    good one

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  2. good, as always :)

    ps: welcom to ur old blog template :)

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  3. Nice, standing in the middle of an ocean so vast that we don't have the courage to go anymore...
    but then, life is just one step away they say.

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  4. so true. Sometimes I feel the same. Full of empty. good one again.

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  5. @blasphemeous....

    thanks!

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  6. @ preeti...

    :) thanks!!

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  7. @ i'll try to be truthful..

    :D thanks!

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  8. The serene solitude....like the silence before the last fall!! Pause before destruction! Nice rhyme mate... :D

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  9. @eye of God....

    thanks!! :)

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