Friday, October 15, 2010

ACCIDENT

55 Fiction


He should not have spoken to her that way. He was sorry. He knew he was doing the right thing now.

Waiting for the Gynecologist, Dr. Sheila- he thought about the first moment they met. Everything had been so perfect. But now- this accident!

“Mr. Sharma”?
“Yes”
“Abortion? Patient”?
“Yes. Leela…”
“Mrs. Leela Patnaik”?
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10 comments:

  1. Amber Light9:13 PM

    I think I kinda got it, but I am not sure. But I am not going to spoil it for the other readers by asking you.

    Keep going!

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  2. rainboy7:51 AM

    hmmm

    nice waiting for next part

    take care

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  3. preethi10:17 AM

    As usual neku Puriyala :(

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  4. Matangi Mawley8:33 PM

    @amber light...

    :)

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  5. Matangi Mawley8:33 PM

    @rainboy.....

    it s final part...

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  6. Matangi Mawley8:34 PM

    @preeti...

    Dals! nokku puriyalenna nekku call pannirukkalaamolyo? :)

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  7. RamNarayanS1:53 PM

    Good 55er with a wonderful twist. Kudos.

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  8. Matangi Mawley7:08 PM

    @ rammm...

    :) thanks!

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  9. shailesh4:20 PM

    I was not able to follow the from start... can u give me the link..
    it looks interesting..

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  10. Matangi Mawley7:49 PM

    :) shail... that's it! no links... it's a fiction in 55 words!

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