Monday, March 7, 2011

OH, SIGH!


Days and nights had been just the same,
There is not a word I would not like to say.
Miles ahead are the shores I would reach
Sighing, I wait- to say it all your way.

Of trees, you say; Of birds, not a thing
Of pebbles, you say; Of ripples, you never may.
Of seas, you do and oceans, no not
Sighing, I wait- to see it all your way.

Sighing, I wait- to say, to see
I wait for a life, not mine ever to be.
Off I leave, off away- I fly
Out comes my words, all mine- Oh Sigh!


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24 comments:

Chitra said...

You have given us a good one... very nice.

பார்வையாளன் said...

nice. Expecting translation

Casey Freeland said...

Lovely

Simran said...

Nice read :)
Keep writing dear ..

The Silhouette said...

Hey, Hi
the first thing that hit me after i read this post is the rawness of the feelings that is expressed...
beautifully penned...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

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Bikramjit said...

well amazing i wud say

got different meanings if all is same and if there is a wrod that you DONT like ot say then say it all ..

so many things you have put together.. trees - birds 0 ripples beautiful loved it


Bikram's

adithyasaravana said...

aha... very nice..

Matangi Mawley said...

@ chitra...

thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ parvaiyalan...

thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ casey...

thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ simran...

thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ the silhouette...

thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ a....


thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ a...


thanks!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ bikram...

thanks! :)

Matangi Mawley said...

@ adithya...

thanks!

RamMmm said...

The last line kind of caught my attention for the dualism in the rhyming 'words, all mine-Oh Sigh!', which also syncs well with ஓசை.

I would be interesting to see how a student of class 7/8 would interpret the poem and write a comprehension of the same. :-D

மோகன்ஜி said...

a brilliant post Maatangi! I just enjoyed it!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ ramm...

:) thanks a ton! wow! a comprehension on my poem... :) jolly good! :)

thanks!!!

Matangi Mawley said...

@ mohanji...

thanks! :)

Aayushi Mehta said...

Great poem! You write so well!

Love your blog.

Matangi Mawley said...

@ ayushi...

thanks! :)

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