Monday, March 7, 2011

OH, SIGH!


Days and nights had been just the same,
There is not a word I would not like to say.
Miles ahead are the shores I would reach
Sighing, I wait- to say it all your way.

Of trees, you say; Of birds, not a thing
Of pebbles, you say; Of ripples, you never may.
Of seas, you do and oceans, no not
Sighing, I wait- to see it all your way.

Sighing, I wait- to say, to see
I wait for a life, not mine ever to be.
Off I leave, off away- I fly
Out comes my words, all mine- Oh Sigh!


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24 comments:

  1. You have given us a good one... very nice.

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  2. nice. Expecting translation

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  3. Nice read :)
    Keep writing dear ..

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  4. Hey, Hi
    the first thing that hit me after i read this post is the rawness of the feelings that is expressed...
    beautifully penned...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  6. well amazing i wud say

    got different meanings if all is same and if there is a wrod that you DONT like ot say then say it all ..

    so many things you have put together.. trees - birds 0 ripples beautiful loved it


    Bikram's

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  7. @ parvaiyalan...

    thanks!

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  8. @ the silhouette...

    thanks!

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  9. The last line kind of caught my attention for the dualism in the rhyming 'words, all mine-Oh Sigh!', which also syncs well with ஓசை.

    I would be interesting to see how a student of class 7/8 would interpret the poem and write a comprehension of the same. :-D

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  10. a brilliant post Maatangi! I just enjoyed it!

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  11. @ ramm...

    :) thanks a ton! wow! a comprehension on my poem... :) jolly good! :)

    thanks!!!

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  12. @ mohanji...

    thanks! :)

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  13. Great poem! You write so well!

    Love your blog.

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