Days and nights had been just the same,
There is not a word I would not like to say.
Miles ahead are the shores I would reach
Sighing, I wait- to say it all your way.
Of trees, you say; Of birds, not a thing
Of pebbles, you say; Of ripples, you never may.
Of seas, you do and oceans, no not
Sighing, I wait- to see it all your way.
Sighing, I wait- to say, to see
I wait for a life, not mine ever to be.
Off I leave, off away- I fly
Out comes my words, all mine- Oh Sigh!
There is not a word I would not like to say.
Miles ahead are the shores I would reach
Sighing, I wait- to say it all your way.
Of trees, you say; Of birds, not a thing
Of pebbles, you say; Of ripples, you never may.
Of seas, you do and oceans, no not
Sighing, I wait- to see it all your way.
Sighing, I wait- to say, to see
I wait for a life, not mine ever to be.
Off I leave, off away- I fly
Out comes my words, all mine- Oh Sigh!
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You have given us a good one... very nice.
ReplyDeletenice. Expecting translation
ReplyDeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteNice read :)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing dear ..
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ReplyDeletethe first thing that hit me after i read this post is the rawness of the feelings that is expressed...
beautifully penned...
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The Silhouette...
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well amazing i wud say
ReplyDeletegot different meanings if all is same and if there is a wrod that you DONT like ot say then say it all ..
so many things you have put together.. trees - birds 0 ripples beautiful loved it
Bikram's
aha... very nice..
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@ bikram...
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@ adithya...
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The last line kind of caught my attention for the dualism in the rhyming 'words, all mine-Oh Sigh!', which also syncs well with ஓசை.
ReplyDeleteI would be interesting to see how a student of class 7/8 would interpret the poem and write a comprehension of the same. :-D
a brilliant post Maatangi! I just enjoyed it!
ReplyDelete@ ramm...
ReplyDelete:) thanks a ton! wow! a comprehension on my poem... :) jolly good! :)
thanks!!!
@ mohanji...
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Great poem! You write so well!
ReplyDeleteLove your blog.
@ ayushi...
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