This ain't- the morn that should dawn
This ain't- the car I should have
This ain't- the speed I should ride in...
This ain't- the way I should walk
This ain't- the way I should talk
This ain't- the love I should be in...
But I do drive the speed- at break of the dawn
And talk as I walk- and I talk them, my mind
This is my dawn- that I know I do have
And I sing to my dawn, to my love...
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This ain't- the life I wanted
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This ain't- the life I wanted
This ain't- the song I would sing
This ain't- the road I should walk-in...
This ain't- the dream I should have
This ain't- the smile I could have
This ain't- the place I should be in...
But I do live to walk- on the road as I sing
And smile as I dream- wherever I be in
This is my life- that I know I do have
And I sing to my life, to my dream...
27 comments:
A very endearing poem to say the least, tugging at the heartstrings.
Excellent!
very nice! this aint a love song reminds me of jbj!
even if everything seems not right, this is where we are and the way we like it :)
nice poem more like a song
Everything is not perfect and life moves on. Good one.
@indr..
:) thanks!
@neers..
hey! thaks!
jbj?
@ i ll try to be truthful..
thanks! :) it is a song...
@priya...
thanks!
that was a very touching write... moving and well expressed...
@rajlakshmi..
thanks!
Your writings always re-in-force my feeling that you have a way with WOTRDS...Good write... keep it up ... good Luck...vmaali
Your writings always re-in-force my feeling that you have a way with WORDS... GoodWrite... keet it up Good-Luck
appa!!
thanks!! :)
This is called life !!
@ thevan..
thanks!
awww.. a sweet poem!!
And this ain't the song of your life......of that I am certain!! :D
@ AV...
thanks!
@ eye of god..
Of that, I m sure too!
Beautiful..
Nothing is perfect, we make it next best to perfect with our deeds n actions...
@ devil incarnate...
thanks!
Nothing's beautiful but we think it is.
Beautiful..
Aptly named and aptly sung, This Ain't! - A song for life.
I look at two different ways to interpret this song. Perhaps it is just me or perhaps it is intentional.
Now..
This Ain't - the song you have sung.
This Ain't - A song to remember.
- Chandramouli
@dave..
that's right!
@ chandramowli..
thanks!
Bravo! Good work.
This ain't the life but this is it.
Give it a thought :)
keep it rollin;)
@ scribbler..
:D well said!
thanks!
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