The morning waves to the night's dark
Trees, upon their dying barks
Dogs, brawling over a piece of bone
The air's filled with cries and moan
It's the death's cradle of eternal sleep
It's never too late to get up and weep
Rise and shine Or give-up and whine
It'll never leave you, in peace again
It's your death's cradle of eternal peace
Just tuck in and be and all will cease
Rise and shine Or give-up and whine
You'd end-up being neither yours nor mine!
The lullabye is now elegy
What suffers, is vitality
Mirrors showing the faces, gone
I've got no mind to just move on
It's the death's cradle of eternal sleep
There's no way you can ever have a peep
Nobody, is your destiny
Give up and plead on your knees
It's your death's cradle of eternal peace
Your legs are locked without the keys
Nobody, is your destiny
Give up and don't take chance, any!
It's the death's cradle of eternity...
16 comments:
very nice.
@ chitra...
thanks!
What do you read, eat ,do... How did u come up with so many fantastic posts.
Another gem this was...
take care n be good
@ rainboy..
thanks!
Looks like someone doesn't believe in Life after Death ;) Anyway, Great post again :) You keep beating yourself :) And i really wish,i could write poetic lines like these, one day!
@fearbond...
thanks!
Not bad at all, sounded more of a Slayer/Anthrax track I could bang my head against! Keep that thoughts on the keypad flowing... keep writing - keep on going!
@ yan....
thanks!
தமிழ் ல சொன்னா, நாங்களும் ரசிப்போம்
@ parvaiyalan..
etha thamizhla sollara alavukku enakku thamizh arivu kidayaathu!
A blog with poetry that actually rhymes! I shall have fun going through this. :)
@ princess...
thanks!
Gee, you should change the title of your blog. Heavy topics being hit.
Reminded me of the W H Auden's poem, 'Funeral Blues', recited in the movie '4 weddings and a funeral'.
Good rhyme and rhythm.
@ ramm..
"LIGHTER SIDE"- Irony.. :) i know.. But see... only when the mind is light, thoughts could be deep and clear.. that's the interpretation!
I ve nt listened to that poem.. lemme see if i could listen to it..
n thanks!
Such a poem of rhythm and rhyme,
Added a flavor to my cradling time!
Well done, Matangi :-)
@antbrain..
thanks!
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