Friday, October 15, 2010

ACCIDENT

55 Fiction


He should not have spoken to her that way. He was sorry. He knew he was doing the right thing now.


Waiting for the Gynecologist, Dr. Sheila- he thought about the first moment they met. Everything had been so perfect. But now- this accident!

“Mr. Sharma”?
“Yes”
“Abortion? Patient”?
“Yes. Leela…”
“Mrs. Leela Patnaik”?

10 comments:

Amber Light said...

I think I kinda got it, but I am not sure. But I am not going to spoil it for the other readers by asking you.

Keep going!

rainboy said...

hmmm

nice waiting for next part

take care

preethi said...

As usual neku Puriyala :(

Matangi Mawley said...

@amber light...

:)

Matangi Mawley said...

@rainboy.....

it s final part...

Matangi Mawley said...

@preeti...

Dals! nokku puriyalenna nekku call pannirukkalaamolyo? :)

RamMmm said...

Good 55er with a wonderful twist. Kudos.

Matangi Mawley said...

@ rammm...

:) thanks!

shail said...

I was not able to follow the from start... can u give me the link..
it looks interesting..

Matangi Mawley said...

:) shail... that's it! no links... it's a fiction in 55 words!

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