Friday, April 4, 2008

DEATH OF HATE


- “It eats and it is eaten”

A scowl that gave birth to a spark. A spark- that grew in size. Burning every bit of flesh it could reach out to. Tearing it down. Bit by bit, the flesh is cooked.

No shriek comes out. And the fire doesn’t stop. It crawls too slowly. Leaving out nothing. Its tongues tasting the meat.

It urges to kill. To taste pain. For nothing else, would make it stop. It relishes pain- the fire. And it prepares the meat- to taste the pain. Pain- not of the self. But of that cause of the scowl. That cause that lit the fire- which fuelled it. It urges the meat to finish the cause.

The meat feels helpless. It wants to finish the cause. But can’t. For, the cause, is in a cocoon. A cocoon, that can never be broken into. The meat burns- hoping that someday, the cocoon would break. And that day, it would finish it; with sheer strength, and no other weapon.

It wanted to relish in the pain of the cause- like the fire. It wanted to see the cause struggle. Hear it shriek. A shriek- that the meat could never let out. It wanted the cause to do it. Only then, the meat would live.

The meat was now coal. Red hot. Burning. But the cocoon was intact. The meat never saw the pain. It could never stop the fire. And soon, it’d be ash: A part of the soil; lost- forever!

70 comments:

  1. Profound. Very.
    I'd like to know the origin, the seed of this piece. Intriguing. And well written

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  2. Wow...haven't come across such a write-up. Good piece of work. :)

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  3. ditto 'amber light'

    and as in your previous posts, i like this imagee to !

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  4. @amber light..

    thnk u!
    i wrote it right after a very bad day at the passport office. i was at the receiving end of the beauracracy..

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  5. WOW!simply WOW!

    no other wards to express how i felt abt the story!!

    n fab template!

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  6. quite unconventional and a unique style....u rock
    beautiful settings as well! :)

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  7. you are great yourself!
    thank god u commented on my blog...would've never gotten to read your stuff otherwise. love masterji btw!

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  8. ps the blog looks brilliant as well!

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  9. deep thoughts brought out on prvocation..beautiful
    tc
    cu

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  10. @compassion unlimited..

    right u r!
    thnk u!

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  11. hmm.. very nicely written.
    kudos!

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  12. Anonymous4:15 PM

    spooky

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  13. @anonymous..

    :) thnk u!

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  14. the pic looks spooky and this is a brilliant post...a very gud write up...keep it up

    Cheers
    Tee

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  15. Pain created by thoughts of pain, a pain so extreme it quells itself.

    The link given below is one of my favorite paintings. What would you write if this were the image for your post ?
    Curious.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Scream

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  16. @harish..

    beautiful!

    n cmmentd my reply on u'r blog!

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  17. eerie!!

    nice new look btw!!

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  18. luv ur blog thnxx for dropping in!!

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  19. Very interesting blog you have! Are the pictures in each of your post, your own paintings? They're stunningly beautiful!

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  20. @guru..

    no.. they r nt mine...
    :)
    thnk u!

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  21. Wow....How did it strike that you wanted to write on it???

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  22. @zahid..

    u can only call tht fate.. it makes u write!

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  23. I cudn't leave a comment as your post made me awe.

    It was splendid with lots of pain.

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  24. I notice the rampancy in your words and am intrigued by it. That makes us two of a kind.:)
    When it comes to writing, why is it that every human being becomes highly emotional?hmmm!Pleaser don't be offended!Emotions are inevitable when it comes to writing and i have always believed that "As long as emotions exist,words exist".

    Anyways, I just loved the idea your article carried and am really looking forward to reading more of your sensible writings.

    Keep the words flowing!

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  25. @rampantheart..

    i believe that emotions form a major part of writing. afterall, tht s exactly why we write. we convey our emotions in such a way so that the reader gets the exact picture of how v feel.. n they should experience the same..
    thnk u!

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  26. i seriously dont know what to comment after reading the first one..beautiful..i will have to spend my nuy reading ur blog now!!

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  27. u narrate well dude, try on some other topic.. I just liked the pic and the way it was presented.

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  28. @anti..

    sure will..

    thnk u!

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  29. Hey , awesome write up....
    Where do u get such lovely pictures for ur posts..They give a wonderful feel for ur posts....
    Such a unique topic to write abt...
    Keep Posting .....

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  30. Well i really had gud tym wid your
    blog.... its really superb... i salute tamizhan spirit....

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  31. tht was awsome... i never thought tht u of all people could feel so hateful abt smething! gr8 post!

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  32. @ananya..

    its a part of the game of life!

    thnk u!

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  33. Unconventional is the word;-)

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  35. lovely post. apt description of hate.

    wonder if hell is jus like tht

    keep posting

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  36. Anonymous5:13 PM

    Loved the post!! Loved the painting !!! and now it has me thinking :)

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  37. Matangi, i know that we barely know each other. But i'm amazed by your writing skills and would really love it if you can contribute to my new group blogging venture which will kickstart in a few days.Please read my latest post and let me know.Thanks!Ciao!

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  38. @rampantheart..

    commented on u'rs!

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  39. Anonymous2:27 AM

    Hojeez... Hate.... In a way, I associate it with one of my posts- 'V'.

    Where did you get tht snap..? The one beside the article..

    The rage surges. Pyrofantasies!

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  40. @ kartz..

    got it frm net! :)
    thnks 4 d comments! :)

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  41. thanks 4 ur comment :) nd dat lead me to read ur blog..amazing...all of them are well written...keep it up!!

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  42. NIce is all what I can say...Death is surely what we all are heading towards if anything at all :P

    Cheers!

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  43. @comfortably numb...

    thnx 4 droppin by!

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  44. that was a gr8 post.. unique style..

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  45. Anonymous11:01 AM

    Fabulous write up. I liked it.

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